Thursday, 10 December 2009

Tolga Ersen

http://petulantboyz.podomatic.com/entry/2009-12-08T13_47_54-08_00

20 comments:

  1. It was a good story.There were some mistakes related to structure.Instead of saying " had no" you should have used the verb "did not".You should have said "underestimated" instead of saying "underestimate".After the verbs "say and listen", you ought to have used the preposition "to".In the sentence school that near, you should have said "the school that was near", which is correct.thanks:)...

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  2. You prepared a good story Tolga. But i am not sure whether you correctly pronunced the verb "hurt" or not.. Thnak you...

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  3. hi tolga,
    Your story is a good one too, but i am not sure whether you correctly pronunced the verb "experience" or not.. Thank you..

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  4. Your story and speech were generally good Tolga but ı am not sure you pronunced 'hurt' correctly or not.tahnk you

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  5. :) Tolga you spoke so slowly and silently . the word " hurt " is mispronounced, ı think. Thank you friend :)

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  6. You had a good introduction Tolga. I also liked your story. However, you could speak a bit faster and louder. Thanks.=)

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  7. It was a good job but I found that you mispronounced the word "experience".Thanks

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  8. I liked your podcast Tolga. However, your voice should have been louder and more understandable.

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  9. hi tolga sorry but you mispronunced "hurt" in one part of yr podcast and you should have use "to" after said (to) me, and as ı know you should use "on" after "trust". thx

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  10. ı think your story is a good one. maybe you could speak a bit faster. ı could heard a pronunciation mistake: experience. but your podcast is goos in general. thank you, Tolga.

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  11. hi my friend,you have some pronunciation mistakes "experience, hurt" thanks

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  12. you could speak a bit faster.you mispronounced "experience"thanks.

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  13. You should pay attention to the pronuncation of "experence". Good job namesake :)

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  14. If you speak naturally and louder, your speech can be better. Thanks.

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  15. thank you for your work. but I think you should spoke more naturally and loudly.

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  16. you said 'stubborn about my decision'. I think stubborn in... ' would be better. also you should speak louder voice. thanks for sharing

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  17. you mispronounced "experience" but apart from that I like your speech,thank you for sharing.

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  18. Thank you Tolga, You speech is good. However, you might have mispronounced the word "experience".Good job, anyway

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  19. Apart from 'hurt,experience', I couldnt find pronuncation mistakes. Your story is very good kanka:) thanks for sharing.. see u. DERMAN

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  20. Hi, Tolga
    You successfully linked your story with your proverb.
    I think you should pay attention to the past form of verbs.
    Thanks for sharing your personal experience. Good job

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