I think you should have organized your introduction better. also, you said 'jumps the word'. 'interrupt' would be better, I think. there are some mispronounced words like decision and computer. be careful about that. thanks for sharing!
hi my freind, you have good story, but you should talk faster. you have some mispronunciations "topic, things". it can be better if you say "he talked quickly again" instead of saying "he talked in this quickly" thank you.
"Topic" is mispronounced Sinan. Also, I think you said "send" instead of "sent" for the Past tense. However, you expressed yourself well. Thank you for your sharing....
hi, sinan I liked your story it was a meaningful story.I agree with my friends ,you mispronounced the word "topic,things". you should speak faster.thanks
Hi, Sinan I guess you should pay attention to your intonation. If your speech contains stress, it would be more natural. Thanks for sharing your personal experience. Good job.
Hi friend. Generally your story and your speech is good. Icouldnt catch important mistakes.However, maybe you should speak faster.thanks..
ReplyDeleteI think you should have organized your introduction better. also, you said 'jumps the word'. 'interrupt' would be better, I think. there are some mispronounced words like decision and computer. be careful about that. thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeletehi my freind, you have good story, but you should talk faster. you have some mispronunciations "topic, things". it can be better if you say "he talked quickly again" instead of saying "he talked in this quickly" thank you.
ReplyDelete"Topic" is mispronounced Sinan. Also, I think you said "send" instead of "sent" for the Past tense. However, you expressed yourself well. Thank you for your sharing....
ReplyDeleteI agree with my friend the misprononced words but execept that I liked your story. your speech is very interesting.. good job sinan.. thanks:)
ReplyDeletehi, sinan I liked your story it was a meaningful story.I agree with my friends ,you mispronounced the word "topic,things". you should speak faster.thanks
ReplyDeleteThanks sınan :) Next time you can speak faster than this . Ok *
ReplyDeleteHi, Sinan
ReplyDeleteI guess you should pay attention to your intonation. If your speech contains stress, it would be more natural.
Thanks for sharing your personal experience. Good job.