Sevil, you have pronunciation mistakes such as ‘ experience,realize’
‘do these advices’ I guess this is a wrong use. I don’t know if advice can be used with ‘do’ maybe it would be better if u use ‘obey’ and as advice is an uncountable noun we can’t say ‘advices’. However ‘it is a piece of cake for me’ is a good use. Your story is a good one. Intonation is okay.
I think, you mispronounced the word “answered”. The correct pronunciation is \an-sər\ .You should be careful about pronunciation while speaking.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is good but little bit slow my friend. try to be faster next time thank you
ReplyDeleteYour speech is good. Your tone of voice is natural, but you spoke slowly, so this makes your speech a bit boring. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteyou have an interesting story. Thanks for sharing
ReplyDeletesometimes your stressing make the speech interesting. Good study my friend.
ReplyDeleteHi,Your voice is low and there is a grammatical mistake: “advices”.generally it is good. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteSevil, you have pronunciation mistakes such as ‘ experience,realize’
ReplyDelete‘do these advices’ I guess this is a wrong use. I don’t know if advice can be used with ‘do’ maybe it would be better if u use ‘obey’ and as advice is an uncountable noun we can’t say ‘advices’. However ‘it is a piece of cake for me’ is a good use. Your story is a good one. Intonation is okay.
hi selin ı read yr comment thx but ı didnt said "do these advices" i said that "pay attention to these advices".
ReplyDeleteI like your story and your intonation but maybe you can speak more naturally.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good. I don't know listen advices is right or not. also advices should be uncountable. thanks for sharing...
ReplyDeleteyou should spoke a bit loudly and you shouldn't made much more stops as you did.but it is clear in general.
ReplyDeleteYou can speak faster and care about your stops. Apart from them, generally good.thanks
ReplyDeletewell mistakes are implied..and except l shall say that try to talk a bit more fluent sevil.:)
ReplyDeleteYour speech is good. Your tone of voice is natural, but maybe you should speak faster.good job.thanks.
ReplyDeleteyou apoke so slowly man ! Also there is pronunciation mistake :9 Be careful next time !
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