It was a good story. There was a pronounciation mistake "because".Instead of saying "said to me Iam sorry",you should have said "said to me he was sorry".In addition, you should have said "how on earth they heard" instead of saying "how on earth they hear".Thanks:)...
Selman Kıd :D thank you for your correct speech :9 ı could not cathch any mistake :9 ı am not as careful as Sevım :) she frightens me ! ı wonder how many mistakes will she find in my speech :)
there are some stops in your speech. you said suddenly my phone was ringing. I think you should have used rang. however it is good job. thanks for sharing
selman it was hard for me to understand it was you:):)ahahaha...nice job my friend..but u could be a little more fluent...apart..u have a clear speech..thnx..
It was a good story. There was a pronounciation mistake "because".Instead of saying "said to me Iam sorry",you should have said "said to me he was sorry".In addition, you should have said "how on earth they heard" instead of saying "how on earth they hear".Thanks:)...
ReplyDeleteI liked your speech and intonation. Also, it was a good story. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteSelman Kıd :D thank you for your correct speech :9 ı could not cathch any mistake :9 ı am not as careful as Sevım :) she frightens me ! ı wonder how many mistakes will she find in my speech :)
ReplyDeleteI liked your story Selman. Your tone of voice and speech were good. Thanks.=)
ReplyDeleteyour story was good and I liked your pronunciation and intonation.Thanks
ReplyDeleteUstun you are great man :):):):)
ReplyDeletehi selman this was good. u should have spoken more fluent thx for sharing
ReplyDeletei like your speech and intonation. yhanks for your sharing.
ReplyDeleteyour intonation is good and you speak clearly.however, you mispronounced "because" "relatives".thanks
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very clear.
ReplyDeleteyou should pay attention to your stops my friend...
I think, you speak slow. You should speak naturally. You mispronounced the word "because". be careful.
ReplyDeleteYour speech was clear but you should be careful about your stops my friend . thank you.
ReplyDeletethere are some stops in your speech. you said suddenly my phone was ringing. I think you should have used rang. however it is good job. thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, your story is good I couldn't catch any mistake.. Thank you..
ReplyDeleteFor me, it is a good job my friend. Only a few mistakes related to structure. However, it was OK. Thank you Selman
ReplyDeleteGenerally, I liked your speech. I couldnt catch any mistake.thanks
ReplyDeleteselman it was hard for me to understand it was you:):)ahahaha...nice job my friend..but u could be a little more fluent...apart..u have a clear speech..thnx..
ReplyDeleteapart from wrong stops it was good overall. thanks for your share...
ReplyDeleteYour intonation is good apart from some stops and your speech is clear Selman. Your story is perfect. You are a bad guy mannnnn:D thanks.. DERMAN
ReplyDeleteHi Selman
ReplyDeleteYour work is good.
I guess reality/riæləti/ and quickly /kwikly/ are mispronounced.
Thanks for sharing your personal experience. Good job.