It was a good story. There were some pronounciation mistakes like "build" and "congratulate".In addition, you should have used "to" preposition after the verb "respect":).Thank you...
Özleeeem :) I liked your story very much but there is pronunciation mistakes in your speech. But I am sure that preparing your sppech, recording and uploading it occured in a very short time :) And these mistakes can stem from it :) Thank you cnms :))
you have a good speech in general my friend. congratulations. you catched only three pronunciation mistake. "immidiatly, subject, recognize" thanks for your sharing.
well the speed rate is normal and the speech is clear but sometimes l guess bec. of the recording there are some voice problems...and the intonations are not so clear...):
It was a good story. There were some pronounciation mistakes like "build" and "congratulate".In addition, you should have used "to" preposition after the verb "respect":).Thank you...
ReplyDeleteözlem,this was a nice story and there was no pronunciation mistake..thanks
ReplyDeleteOverall good. No ungrammatical structures or mispronounced vocabulary. Thanks Özlem.
ReplyDeleteyou chose a good story.However, you mispronounced the word "recognize". Thank you anyway.
ReplyDeleteÖzleeeem :) I liked your story very much but there is pronunciation mistakes in your speech. But I am sure that preparing your sppech, recording and uploading it occured in a very short time :) And these mistakes can stem from it :) Thank you cnms :))
ReplyDeleteYour story is also attractive. I enjoyed it. Yoıur tone of voice was also good. I caught "immedately" as a mispronunciation. Thanks Özlem.=)
ReplyDeleteYour story was very nice Özlem.I liked ıt and I didn't hear any pronunciation mistakesThanks
ReplyDeletehi özlem your tone of voice was good. you had some mistakes such as "subject,recognize, immediately". thx fr sharing
ReplyDeletethere are not many pronouncation mistakes. However wordchoise is important pay attention to that
ReplyDeleteyou have a good speech in general my friend. congratulations. you catched only three pronunciation mistake. "immidiatly, subject, recognize" thanks for your sharing.
ReplyDeleteÖzlem, I liked your story and your speech, but you mispronounced “recognize”.good job.thanks.
ReplyDeleteYou express yourself with clear statements. Good story. however, you should pay attention to your stops...
ReplyDeleteYour fluency and intonation is good. Also, your sentencse are clear.
ReplyDeletereally good job my friend there is nothing to say. thank you.
ReplyDeleteit is very good story. there are some mispronounced words as friends said. I think you should speak more natural. good job! thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteIt is good but I think you mispronounce the word "because". In addition to this, I like your story.
ReplyDeleteİt was good story. Also as my friends said, there were some words which were pronunced wrongly. thanks
ReplyDeletewell the speed rate is normal and the speech is clear but sometimes l guess bec. of the recording there are some voice problems...and the intonations are not so clear...):
ReplyDeleteYour story is attractive and well organized. I couldnt catch many pronunciation mistakes,good job. Thanks. DERMAN
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