your story is a good one. but ı think you have some mistakes like 'format', 'has more chance', and 'take the test last year'. apart from these, ı think your podcast is good and you spoke really natural. thank you.
Tolga Özer said... You said " I didn't go to Italy". May be you wanted to say " I didn't want to go to Italy" It was weird. However, your experience and Speaking are marvelous.
She has a good introduction. She has some pronunciation mistakes like ; format, there are some pause in her speech which made her speech a little unnatural. Except for these things, her story and grammar are okay.
Your voice is not clear. You speak naturally but you mispronounced “foreign”(however: forən) and “chance”.ın addition, while you were speaking you were saying “ııı” “eee” a lot.thanks.
i think u had problems during recording. cause the your voice changes.and when u stop u should use expressions like "well" or "umm" rather than "ıııı".
Hi,Nilişah I like your pronuncation but there are only two words "foreign" and "format" that may be mispronounced. Apart from them, your work is very good:):) Thanks for sharing your personal experience. Good job.
your story is a good one. but ı think you have some mistakes like 'format', 'has more chance', and 'take the test last year'. apart from these, ı think your podcast is good and you spoke really natural. thank you.
ReplyDeleteThere are some distractions such as “eee” . Also, you mispronounced “foreign”. The correct pronunciation is \fȯr-ən, fär- ən \
ReplyDeleteTolga Özer said... You said " I didn't go to Italy". May be you wanted to say " I didn't want to go to Italy" It was weird. However, your experience and Speaking are marvelous.
ReplyDeleteShe has a good introduction. She has some pronunciation mistakes like ; format, there are some pause in her speech which made her speech a little unnatural. Except for these things, her story and grammar are okay.
ReplyDeleteApart from some pauses, your speech is natural.You should have tried to record your speech one more time to make it better.
ReplyDeleteMy friend I like your proverb and your story. You speak naturally and I hope you will decide to go to Japan or not..
ReplyDeleteYour voice is not clear. You speak naturally but you mispronounced “foreign”(however: forən) and “chance”.ın addition, while you were speaking you were saying “ııı” “eee” a lot.thanks.
ReplyDeletei think u had problems during recording. cause the your voice changes.and when u stop u should use expressions like "well" or "umm" rather than "ıııı".
ReplyDeleteı like your natural speaking style and ı couldnt see any negative criticize. there you go nil :)
ReplyDeletehttp://aycayalcin.podomatic.com/player/web/2009-12-16T10_59_38-08_00
ReplyDeletenilisah this is the correct link
Can you listen and then make comment:)?
I know that you spoke spontaneously, so this is very good job :)apart from some pronounced words like format, you did perfect. cong!.. :)
ReplyDeleteApart from your pauses and the word 'format', generally it is a good speech.thanks
ReplyDeletehi nilisah apart from your pauses yr speech was good but next time you can record yr voice abit louder thx
ReplyDeletehi friend, your voice is a bit complex. It is a bit hard to understand. You are natural but you could be faster.. Thanks
ReplyDeleteI admireyour speech :) You spoke sonaturally :) Thank you my sweaty.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is natural and easy to understand.Your story is also a good one,thanks..
ReplyDeleteHi,Nilişah
ReplyDeleteI like your pronuncation but there are only two words "foreign" and "format" that may be mispronounced.
Apart from them, your work is very good:):)
Thanks for sharing your personal experience. Good job.