your speech is very clear. you have a good introduction and conclusion. however, you should pay attention to your pronunciation little bit. you mispronounce the words:stiation,detailed and excited.
Your speech is impressive.it is really interesting.however, there is a grammatical mistake: “in the one evening”. I think that it should have been “in one evening.”good jıb thanks
your speech is a bit slow and too emphasized. there are some mispronunced words : situation and present. apart fom these, you organized your speech well, thanks..
Hi,Gülhahım You start with a good introduction. But I want to say that if you be careful with voice tone, intonation; I believe it would be better. Thanks for sharing your personal experience. Good job.
I think, you should speak more naturally. Your speech is a bit slow.
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very clear. you have a good introduction and conclusion. however, you should pay attention to your pronunciation little bit. you mispronounce the words:stiation,detailed and excited.
ReplyDeleteYou are utilising conjunctions perfectly. However, you should try to speak like a native speaker next time.
ReplyDeleteShe speaks too slowly which distracted me in some places but her pronunciation and story is good.
ReplyDeleteYour story is interesting.Your sentences are clear,but your speech is too slow.You mispronounced the words 'said' and 'situation'.
ReplyDeleteI think your speech is so clear that I understand every word you say but you should speak more naturally.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is impressive.it is really interesting.however, there is a grammatical mistake: “in the one evening”. I think that it should have been “in one evening.”good jıb thanks
ReplyDeletethe word "situation" is pronunciated wrongly.
ReplyDeleteand your speech should have been more natural.
your speech is a bit slow and too emphasized. there are some mispronunced words : situation and present. apart fom these, you organized your speech well, thanks..
ReplyDeletesituation was mispronunced, apart from this I liked your story and speech.thanks
ReplyDeletewell,my friends said the mispronun. words..except these,u had better put more intonation into ur speech...and talk a bit more fluent...
ReplyDeletehi glhnm u spoke very different:) you mispronunced "situation" wrongly maybe next time u try to speak more naturally thx
ReplyDeletehi friend, firstly, your voice is a bit thin in record different:)You could have spoken faster and skip some phonemes while speaking.. thanks
ReplyDelete:D Gülhanım You spoke so clearly that I understood every part of your story :) As my friends said, Except some pronunciation mistakes, It is perfect !
ReplyDeleteExcept some small pronouncation mistakes, it is a good speech and well organized.
ReplyDeleteHi,Gülhahım
ReplyDeleteYou start with a good introduction.
But I want to say that if you be careful with voice tone, intonation; I believe it would be better.
Thanks for sharing your personal experience. Good job.