It was a good story. There were no pronounciation mistakes,but there were some mistakes related to structure. You should have said "make me relaxed and not cry" instead of saying "make me relaxed and not to cry".In addition, you should have said "asked my mother where I was" instead of saying "asked my mother where I am".Thanks:)...
Your speech is good; not boring and easy to understand. Your pronunciation is also good. Only one mistake related to structure as friends stated above. But that is all. so here, you go :) thank you man. Congratulations.
Hi, Ferhat Your speech is good but you may pay more attention to your intonation in your next podcast. Besides that, it is nice. Thanks for sharing your personal experience. Good job.
It was a good story. There were no pronounciation mistakes,but there were some mistakes related to structure. You should have said "make me relaxed and not cry" instead of saying "make me relaxed and not to cry".In addition, you should have said "asked my mother where I was" instead of saying "asked my mother where I am".Thanks:)...
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing..it was a nice story.except for the some mistakes about strucructures,it was ok.
ReplyDeleteferhat :9 I could not catch a mistake which is related to pronunciation :) Thank you... "She asked my mother where I am " :D Be careful :))
ReplyDeleteI liked your story Ferhat. I agree with my friends. You should be more careful about the structure. Thanks.=)
ReplyDeleteyour story and your pronunciation were good but as my friends said you should be more careful about structure mistakes.Thanks.
ReplyDeleteIt was a good story Ferhat.However, as all of my friends mentioned you should be careful about the structure and intonation:=)
ReplyDeletehi ferhat your story was good one and tone of voice,too. but i heard a mistake, you should have said "she asked my mthr where ı was". thx
ReplyDeletethanks for your sharing. you have some structure mistakes.that is all.
ReplyDeletehi, your voice tone is good,but there are some grammatical mistakes that were mentioned above.generally it is good.thanks.
ReplyDeleteIf you speak more fluently, your speech can be better. Thanks…
ReplyDeletethank you for your sharing my friend . but I think you should spoke more naturally. apart from that there is no problem.
ReplyDeleteyou spoke a bit slowly. I think you should speak a bit faster. good job! thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteyou speak very clearly but I think you should speak more naturally. however, I like your story.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is good; not boring and easy to understand. Your pronunciation is also good. Only one mistake related to structure as friends stated above. But that is all. so here, you go :) thank you man. Congratulations.
ReplyDeleteYour speech was good and understandable. Also your pronunciation was ok.thanks
ReplyDeleteYour story and pronuncation is good my friend. You have some small grammar mistakes but not very important. thanks. DERMAN
ReplyDeleteHi, Ferhat
ReplyDeleteYour speech is good but you may pay more attention to your intonation in your next podcast.
Besides that, it is nice.
Thanks for sharing your personal experience. Good job.