ıt was a good story. there was a pronounciation mistake which was "hurt".You should have used "to" preposition with the verb said(to) me.There was a problem with structure. You should have said "she said that she would not make " instead of saying "she said that I would not make".Thanks:)...
hi ezgi, your story is very interesting and your proverb about human nature is very meaningful. However, your voice sounds boring and in turn, it makes this good story boring. there are no clear mistakes. thanx.
Ezgi, your story was good and meaningful. Also I couldht hear any pronunciation mistake. Your voice was a little slow but maybe it was necessary :) tahnk you
hi ezgi i think your voice tone was very soft it wasnt good for a podcast but i liked it and yr story was interesting it drew my attention thx for sharing
Your story was interesting. Also, your speech was natural and I liked your tone of voice. I didn't find any pronunciation mistake. Maybe you should have spoken a bit faster. Thanks.
ıt was a good story. there was a pronounciation mistake which was "hurt".You should have used "to" preposition with the verb said(to) me.There was a problem with structure. You should have said "she said that she would not make " instead of saying "she said that I would not make".Thanks:)...
ReplyDeletehi ezgi,
ReplyDeleteyour story is very interesting and your proverb about human nature is very meaningful. However, your voice sounds boring and in turn, it makes this good story boring. there are no clear mistakes. thanx.
Ezgi, your story was good and meaningful. Also I couldht hear any pronunciation mistake. Your voice was a little slow but maybe it was necessary :) tahnk you
ReplyDeleteEzgi :) you spoke so slowly and you could have spoken abit louder. There are also mistakes in sentence structure :) be careful pls :)
ReplyDeleteI liked your being relaxed while speaking Ezgi. Your tone of voice and intonation are really good;however, you could be a bit faster. Thank you.=)
ReplyDeleteI liked your story Ezgi.Good job. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteHi Ezgi
ReplyDeleteıt was a good story I liked it and I couldn't find any pronunciation mistakes thank you for your good job
hi ezgi i think your voice tone was very soft it wasnt good for a podcast but i liked it and yr story was interesting it drew my attention thx for sharing
ReplyDeleteYour story was interesting. Also, your speech was natural and I liked your tone of voice. I didn't find any pronunciation mistake. Maybe you should have spoken a bit faster. Thanks.
ReplyDeletehi my friend,thanks for your sharing. but your voice is too slow. you should talk a lot faster than this tone.
ReplyDeleteı liked your story and also your proverb but you speak so slowly.you should speak a bit fastr and louder.thanks.
ReplyDeleteyour tone of voive is very good. you are speaking so fluntly. good job...
ReplyDeleteYour tone of voice is good. However, you should speak more fluently. Thanks…
ReplyDeletethank you for your work friend : but I think you should pay more attention to your stops.
ReplyDeleteI didn't find any pronunciation mistake.but you should have spoken a bit faster. then it would be better. thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteYou didn't speak naturally.I think you shouldn't speak so slowly. However, I like your story. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteYour speech is natural. Your pronunciation and your tone of voice is good. I liked your story. Thanks
ReplyDeleteIt is a good job friend thank, I have nothing to say..
ReplyDeleteEzgi this one is a good job. There arent any mistake and there is a good story.. thanks. DERMAN
ReplyDeleteHi, Ezgi
ReplyDeleteIt is very natural.
Thanks for sharing your personal experience. Good job.