The story starts well with an introduction.You should have used "by" preposition with themselves.In addition to this, you ought to have used the preposition "for" with the word irresponsible.After the verb "delay"you should end the verb with the "ing" aspect, for you used a verb.In addition, you shoul have said "was frightened" instead of "had frightened", since you used a passive structure.The word "borrow" is mispronounced.In addition, you ought to have told “electricity bill” instead of “electric bill”.Despite these, it was a good and reasonable story:) thanks…
Good job Esra. I liked your story. As Sevim told there were some structure mistakes. Your pronunciation was good but I only realized that you mispronounced "among". But nevertheless, it is obvious that u paid much attention to your work. Thanks
hi esra In my opinion it was good.I liked your story.Your pronunciation also was good and it is very clear to understand it.The music makes it very different thanks.
thank you esra your introduction really made me understand the relationsihp between your story and your proverrb. It was really effective.Your tone and pronunciation is helped me to understand better :9
Your story is interesting and good. There were not many mistakes I think. Howveer, you should have given more attention to intonation and tone of voice. For example, while saying "suudenly", you could be more excited or surprised. Nevertheless, good job. Thank you.=)
The story starts well with an introduction.You should have used "by" preposition with themselves.In addition to this, you ought to have used the preposition "for" with the word irresponsible.After the verb "delay"you should end the verb with the "ing" aspect, for you used a verb.In addition, you shoul have said "was frightened" instead of "had frightened", since you used a passive structure.The word "borrow" is mispronounced.In addition, you ought to have told “electricity bill” instead of “electric bill”.Despite these, it was a good and reasonable story:) thanks…
ReplyDeleteGood job Esra. I liked your story. As Sevim told there were some structure mistakes. Your pronunciation was good but I only realized that you mispronounced "among". But nevertheless, it is obvious that u paid much attention to your work. Thanks
ReplyDeleteI liked your podcast Esra, especially the music which you use at the end of your speech. This is the different one.
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ReplyDeleteIn my opinion it was good.I liked your story.Your pronunciation also was good and it is very clear to understand it.The music makes it very different thanks.
thank you esra your introduction really made me understand the relationsihp between your story and your proverrb. It was really effective.Your tone and pronunciation is helped me to understand better :9
ReplyDeleteYour story is interesting and good. There were not many mistakes I think. Howveer, you should have given more attention to intonation and tone of voice. For example, while saying "suudenly", you could be more excited or surprised. Nevertheless, good job. Thank you.=)
ReplyDeleteAlso using the music is a really effective idea. :)
ReplyDeletewithout mentioning introduction in your story may be a failure for commenters good job intonation is important please pay attention to that part.
ReplyDeletehi esra yr story is different one. you mispronounced "memory". you should have used intonation. thx
ReplyDeleteesra your story really good and it explains your proverb clearly.Also your intonation is good and it is a good idea to use music. thanks.
ReplyDeleteyour story is really good and you have a good introduction. i like it. thanks for your sharing.
ReplyDeleteİntroduction was effective . also utilising music is good idea of course. Intonation, and pronunciation are good also.
ReplyDeleteYour tone of voice and intonation is good. Also, your sentences are clear. Thanks...
ReplyDeletemusic is very good idea. you mispronounced responsibility. also there are some stops that distract me. however it is a good job. thanks..
ReplyDeleteI like your podcast my friend and I couldn't catch any mistake. Thanks..
ReplyDeleteyour speech was so good my friend. the introduction part and starting and finishing with a song was a smartly idea.
ReplyDeleteYour speech was good. However there were some structure mistakes. The music was good idea.thanks
ReplyDeleteYour speech is good and there are not many mistakes. Music is also effective. Thanks..
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