Your introduction was very good.You had some problems related to thesome structures. For example, You should have told "such a situation" instead of "such situation".In addition,you should have told "would have to"instead of saying "would".You ought to have said "we weren't workers" instead of "we weren't worker".Furthermore, you ought to have said "thinking more sensibly" instead of " thinking more sensible".It is a good story to understand life:)thanks...
hi derman, your speech is very good, there r not many clear pronunciation mistakes, however, i noticed that u say ' in that day', it is grammatically wrong. it should be 'on '. c u.
Derman thank you, You have a good job. Only a few pronunciation mistakes. I am not sure whether u pronunced "unluckily" and "again" correct or not. Thanks again
" I was feeling myself lonely" It seem as if There is grammar mistake in this sentence.But I am not sure :) You spoked so slwly:) Also There are some pronunciation mistakes. However, your introduction is good. You succeded to take our attention by asking questions.It is a good point I think :) Thank you....
hi derman sorry but while ı was listening you, ı felt that derman spoke as if he had been(felt) under pressure.:). your tone of voice is understandable. thx
derman you have a good story. however you should talk faster. you have structure mistake "i was thinking more sensible" you have some mispronunciations "attend, again, calm" thanks for your sharing.
very good introduction and very good story. however you used modify. I don't know if it is true or not. also you mispronounced absolutely.thanks for sharing..
Derman! Is the expression "thinking more sensible" grammaticaly true? I couldn't be sure. :) I think, you should have spoken more fluently. thank you.
ReplyDeleteYour introduction was very good.You had some problems related to thesome structures. For example, You should have told "such a situation" instead of "such situation".In addition,you should have told "would have to"instead of saying "would".You ought to have said "we weren't workers" instead of "we weren't worker".Furthermore, you ought to have said "thinking more sensibly" instead of " thinking more sensible".It is a good story to understand life:)thanks...
ReplyDeletehi derman,
ReplyDeleteyour speech is very good, there r not many clear pronunciation mistakes, however, i noticed that u say ' in that day', it is grammatically wrong. it should be 'on '.
c u.
Derman thank you, You have a good job. Only a few pronunciation mistakes. I am not sure whether u pronunced "unluckily" and "again" correct or not. Thanks again
ReplyDeleteGenerally I lıked your speech Derman. Apart from some garmmatical mistakes, It was good. Your tone of voıce also ok. Thank you
ReplyDelete" I was feeling myself lonely" It seem as if There is grammar mistake in this sentence.But I am not sure :) You spoked so slwly:) Also There are some pronunciation mistakes. However, your introduction is good. You succeded to take our attention by asking questions.It is a good point I think :) Thank you....
ReplyDeleteGood job. I liked your podcast. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteyour speech was good and your introduction also was good.But there are some grammatical mistakes.Thanks.
ReplyDeleteHi derman, I liked your speech. It was nice to listen. I didn’t notice any important mistakes. Thanks.
ReplyDeletehi derman sorry but while ı was listening you, ı felt that derman spoke as if he had been(felt) under pressure.:). your tone of voice is understandable. thx
ReplyDeletepay attention to your grammar and word choise teh rest is good
ReplyDeletederman you have a good story. however you should talk faster. you have structure mistake "i was thinking more sensible"
ReplyDeleteyou have some mispronunciations "attend, again, calm"
thanks for your sharing.
Your voice is clear and I liked your story,but you should have spoken faster.I couldn't catch any inportant mistakes.thanks.
ReplyDeletederman, you should have spoken more fluently.
ReplyDeleteHowever, your statements are clear. good job...
Your sentences are clear. If you speak fluently, it can be better.
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Can you listen to this and then make comment please?
thank you for your sharing my friend , it was clear but your intonation is not so good.
ReplyDeletevery good introduction and very good story. however you used modify. I don't know if it is true or not. also you mispronounced absolutely.thanks for sharing..
ReplyDeleteYour speech is very clear, I understand every sentences. Thank you.
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