my friend,your voice is clear and also your story is good. but you said that“after experiencing” you should have said “ after having experienced” thanks.
There are a few mistakes in pronunciation for example in ‘electronic’ , congrutulations, . there are some pauses in your speech. But generally ur speech is good!
Your intonation is good. It helps me understand easily while listening. Thanks…
ReplyDeletei like your story ceyda, thanks for your sharing. but you should speak little bit faster. you only have one pronunciation mistake "sales..."
ReplyDeleteYou must pay attention to your stops. Of course" sales" is mispronounced. However tone of voice is good.
ReplyDeletemy friend,your voice is clear and also your story is good. but you said that“after experiencing” you should have said “ after having experienced” thanks.
ReplyDeleteThere are a few mistakes in pronunciation for example in ‘electronic’ , congrutulations, . there are some pauses in your speech. But generally ur speech is good!
ReplyDeleteI liked your story. you mispronunced salesman. although there are some pauses in your speech, it is good. thanks...
ReplyDeleteYour pronounciation is good but I think you mispronounced the word "shampoo". You should pronounced /ʃæmˈpu/
ReplyDeleteyour speech was good and clear. but I want to add something about yor topic, if I were your position I think I would find and beat him prperly.
ReplyDeletethanx for your sharing. good job... it s very clear and natural....
ReplyDeleteThere were some pronunciation misakes. Apart from this, I liked it. Generally good.thanks
ReplyDeletehi :) your story ws different one i liked it:) everything is ok
ReplyDeleteabove friends wrote yr mistakes please pay attention:)
Your story and record and speech are so clear and so good..thanks
ReplyDeletewell done my friend..though you need to talk a bit louder..:):)
ReplyDeleteyour voice is clear and also your story is good. Maybe you should talk a bit lively.good job.thanks
ReplyDelete:D Ceyda you spoke so naturally my friend :) As my friend said there is a pronunciation mistake. also Be faster next time :)
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